Hyrax is a Ruby on Rails Engine built by the Samvera community. Hyrax provides a foundation for creating many different digital repository applications.
Refers to the Dec. 2016 sprint in the future tense. Needs a summary statement about development.
Give structure to the sprawling feature list. 40 or 50 bullet points is not readable or persuasive. Break into sections like "Data Modeling", "Integrations", "Discovery", "UI/UX/Design", etc.
The first sentence after the "What is Hyrax?" title should literally answer the question. "Hyrax is...", not "Hyrax uses...". References to Sufia and CurationConcerns there should be links.