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Revision of ISO/IEC 29500-2 (Open Packaging Conventions)
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7.5.1 Duplicate definition of “Relationships part” #33

Closed RexJaeschke closed 4 years ago

RexJaeschke commented 4 years ago

GB-035 |   | 7.5.1 | Para 6 | ed | The text defines “Relationships part”, but this is already defined in clause 3.2.9.

Delete the third sentence. Alternatively, remove the definition in clause 3.2.9. |  

murata2makoto commented 4 years ago

I do not understand. The third sentence of the 6th para is "This part holds the list of relationships for the source part. " Is this a definition?

murata2makoto commented 4 years ago

The definition in Clause 3 is "part containing an XML representation of relationships".

franciscave commented 4 years ago

As Murata-san suggests, I think I was interpreting the third sentence of the sixth paragraph of 7.5.1 as a definition.

Actually, on re-reading it, I believe that this sentence is incorrect. It should say "This part holds the list of relationships for the source part or package."

Even with this change, I am still not entirely happy, because the definition in 3.2.9 could easily have been "part containing an XML representation of relationships for a source part or package", in which case the sentence in the sixth para of 7.5.1 would clearly be redundant.

franciscave commented 4 years ago

My point is that currently the definition of "Relationships part" is partly in 3.2.9 and partly in 7.5.1. I think it would be best if it was all in 3.2.9, but let's see what folks feel after further reflection.

murata2makoto commented 4 years ago

How about "This part holds the list of relationships for the source"?

Unlike the definition in Clause 3, I tried here to state that all relationships for the source (and nothing else) are represented in this Relationships part associated with the source.

franciscave commented 4 years ago

On reflection, I am happy with 'This part holds the list of relationships for the source' in 7.5.1 and to leave 3.2.9 as it is.

RexJaeschke commented 4 years ago

WG4 approved on 2020-08-26, as summarized by Francis above.