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@Spacegirl123 - Hello, My name is Kalyan , a Data and AI scientist from India. With extensive experience in tackling machine learning and artificial intelligence challenges at the enterprise level across diverse domains, I am thrilled to review your paper for the SciPy Conference. This is my second year in a row reviewing for the conference, and I look forward to offering valuable suggestions and inputs to refine your paper, ensuring it effectively reaches and benefits a broader audience.
Hi @Spacegirl123 Below are some points that you can incorporate in order to improve the abstract. Let me know if you have any questions.
The introduction stays on track with its story. It explains the difficulties and aims clearly, without making things more complicated than they need to be. Good job!
If possible simplify terms like "phase curves" and provide quick explanations.
Regarding the goals, they are well-defined and commendable. However, it would be beneficial to elaborate more on how the developed methodology (PhAst) will be used in planetary defense tests such as NASA’s DART mission.
Additionally, please clarify how characterizing asteroid populations will help us better understand the diversity of compositions in the solar system.
The methodology section is clear and concise, however I think you can describe how the algorithm integrates different data types. Include a brief overview or diagram of the workflow to make the process more transparent.
In my opinion, It is good to explain how data from different sources are combined.
Overall the process details are good. Consider adding diagrams or flowcharts to visually represent the observational process, which can help readers better understand the sequence and interaction of steps.
The initial observations of the Didymos binary asteroid are well-detailed, including its size, albedo, rotation period, and composition. This gives a good starting point for understanding the asteroid's properties. Well done!
Please clarify if the processing time includes data retrieval and pre-processing? Also, provide a brief context for the listed physical properties for the NASA LUCY and UAE missions' targets to show their relevance.
The future applications of PhAst are promising. May be we can mention specific benefits or new opportunities these applications might bring.
Avoid or simplify technical terms where possible. Provide brief explanations for any unavoidable technical jargon.
Consider adding diagrams, flowcharts, or graphs to make complex processes and data patterns clearer.
Please ensure a consistent narrative flow and structure throughout the sections for easier understanding and readability.
This concludes my initial review. Happy to clarify/ discuss if you have any questions on my comments. Good luck!
Hi @Spacegirl123 - The introduction stays on track with its story. It explains the difficulties and aims clearly, without making things more complicated than they need to be. Good job!
If possible simplify terms like "phase curves" and provide quick explanations.
Regarding the goals, they are well-defined and commendable. However, it would be beneficial to elaborate more on how the developed methodology (PhAst) will be used in planetary defense tests such as NASA’s DART mission.
Additionally, please clarify how characterizing asteroid populations will help us better understand the diversity of compositions in the solar system.
Review reminders sent to @chuchugo and @kalyan678
Hi @Spacegirl123 Thanks for your paper. After reading the paper, here are some suggestions regarding the improvement. Hope you find it helpful.
The paper discusses measurements on phase angles of asteroids. The author combines sparse photometry from surveys and dense photometry from citizens to determine asteroids' albedo, size, rotation, strength, and composition. Didymos binary asteroid and combined them with GAIA etc. surveys. Measured 35-minute decrease in the mutual orbital period after impact by the DART mission.
The paper seems to be incomplete. Please explain your algorithm, figures, mathematical definitions, equations, etc.. If a key part of the algorithm has already been published, please summarize the key steps and give a full citation in the references. The goal is to make the paper reproducible. Without completeness and reproducibility, it is impossible to review it and also difficult to learn from it. Hope it can be revised in a more solidated way since you probably have a nice algorithm that astronomers can use. I will give some specific comments below, but they all point to this general comment.
Organization:
Verifiability:
Computational content and Technical content:
Clarity:
@chuchugo and @kalyan678 you may also open a review on this PR to line by line make suggestions and comments more specifically. That way when the author resolves a review comment or suggestion, we can know how much progress is being made to address your concerns.
@chuchugo and @kalyan678 you may also open a review on this PR to line by line make suggestions and comments more specifically. That way when the author resolves a review comment or suggestion, we can know how much progress is being made to address your concerns.
@cbcunc - I have already provided my initial review section wise as per the paper. I hope that helps the author to understand the context and work accordingly. Let me know if there are any questions!
Hello,
I have addressed all the reviews in my updated paper. I wanted to change my image files and banner since they do not match with my text, but GitHub is not letting me remove them/add new ones. The edit and delete buttons are greyed out. Could you let me know how I can change them?
Best regards, Arushi
Hello,
I have addressed all the reviews in my updated paper. I wanted to change my image files and banner since they do not match with my text, but GitHub is not letting me remove them/add new ones. The edit and delete buttons are greyed out. Could you let me know how I can change them?
Best regards, Arushi
@Spacegirl123 Do you mean you are not able to make new commits to your Spacegirl123:2024 branch?
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