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A Project for Fiction.
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chp0 complete #41

Closed awacs closed 11 years ago

awacs commented 11 years ago

i'll merge chp1 and chp2 tomorrow

awacs commented 11 years ago

Finished writing the new first chapter. I'll merge the current chapter1 and 2 into the new chapter 2 tomorrow. 这样情节比较紧凑。

scorpiohw commented 11 years ago

我突然想到，我们可以参考美剧剧本的情节设定。美剧的剧本一般故事都很紧凑，少数故事精彩十足。从剧本中汲取营养，可以作为我们开阔思路的手段。

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Finished writing the new first chapter. I'll merge the current chapter1 and 2 into the new chapter 2 tomorrow. 这样情节比较紧凑。

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awacs commented 11 years ago

我一向对美剧不感冒。。。。。

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我突然想到，我们可以参考美剧剧本的情节设定。美剧的剧本一般故事都很紧凑，少数故事精彩十足。从剧本中汲取营养，可以作为我们开阔思路的手段。

On Jan 12, 2013, at 9:23 AM, awacs notifications@github.com wrote:

Finished writing the new first chapter. I'll merge the current chapter1 and 2 into the new chapter 2 tomorrow. 这样情节比较紧凑。

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awacs commented 11 years ago

一向觉得总是为了紧凑而紧凑，感觉很不自然。

On Fri, Jan 11, 2013 at 9:14 PM, Harold Wang haroldzwang@gmail.com wrote:

我一向对美剧不感冒。。。。。

On Fri, Jan 11, 2013 at 9:13 PM, Scorpiohw notifications@github.comwrote:

我突然想到，我们可以参考美剧剧本的情节设定。美剧的剧本一般故事都很紧凑，少数故事精彩十足。从剧本中汲取营养，可以作为我们开阔思路的手段。

On Jan 12, 2013, at 9:23 AM, awacs notifications@github.com wrote:

Finished writing the new first chapter. I'll merge the current chapter1 and 2 into the new chapter 2 tomorrow. 这样情节比较紧凑。

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May the Force be with you

May the Force be with you

awacs commented 11 years ago

我倒是觉得，你可以从你自身的经历找素材。 比如我现在四个主角，男主角是我被动迟疑的一面，女主角是我积极主动地一面。男二号Michael是我害怕成为的一面，女二号是我希望成为的一面。四个人侧面反映了我自己心中的矛盾与思考。