I think the current introduction is quite long and you might easily lose the attention of the not-yet-convinced reader.
The "Why" section is very succinct and would serve quite well as a "tl;dr" summary overview at the top.
The introduction could be renamed to "illustration".
I think the current introduction is quite long and you might easily lose the attention of the not-yet-convinced reader. The "Why" section is very succinct and would serve quite well as a "tl;dr" summary overview at the top. The introduction could be renamed to "illustration".