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Translation: We deployed Envoy Proxy to make Monzo faster #300

Closed haiker2011 closed 5 years ago

haiker2011 commented 5 years ago

请审校者在合并该 PR 前需要检查以下内容:

当所有以上问题都确定之后,可以由管理者合并 PR 并关闭关联 issue。

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x19990416 commented 5 years ago

文章语句通顺: 1.“的” 删除 图片

  1. 语句需要重新组织下 个人建议仅供参考:“在我们使用的每种语言中实现这些复杂的特性,会对我们要使用的新事物设置很高的障碍” 图片
  2. 我们设置了Envoy来接收和路由上的HTTP请求 图片
  3. 入侵=>入口,交通=>流量,负责像以前一样将流量路由到=>像以前一样负责将流量路由到 图片
  4. 因为流量来自一个共享的Envoy所以只能在网络级别上接收来自某些Kubernaetes Pod ip 的流量。 图片

以上更改建议仅供参考

haiker2011 commented 5 years ago

@x19990416 谢谢你的review,已经修改完成!

x19990416 commented 5 years ago

envoy和所以之间加一个“,” 图片

负责像以前一样将流量路由到=>像以前一样负责将流量路由到 图片