Closed Edward-Ross-Gridimp closed 1 year ago
I have reapplied the changes using LibreOffice V7.3.6.2 and saved as word format.
The diagram in section 3.7.3 was rotated before I made the changes, so remains rotated, but legible.
Changes already merged into main.
The added text, metering and meteringResponse messages and contractId and ServiceType fields are looking good plus I am able to open the file in word again!
One comment is that in step 2 of the settle phase the 'DNO' is mentioned. This is the only place in the document that mentiones DNO (except for the glossary) so if this is equivalent to 'DSO' I would suggest using DSO here and removing DNO from the glossary.
Second thing: Many things appear to be broken. E.g. broken links to other places in the document (e.g. on page 12 'see section 4.2.10()'), a broken footnote on page 12 (!!br0ken!!), and many use case diagrams e.g. 3-14, 3-16,, 3-17, 3-18, 3-20, 3-22.
Are these caused by these commits? Or are these issues that need to be addressed separately?