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Michael 逐字稿:I think learing music can make us physically and mentally happy. I have guater lesson and I am good at it. so I think learn music is useful. 修改稿:I like playing guitar very much and still play guitar. I think learning music can cultivate sentiment, enrich emotion and make life more interesting.
I think it is good to play a musical intrument. Everyone knows that we can not just pay attention to the scores we must learn everything. I learn piano in 4 years old, it is useful. I think it is good to play a musical instrument. Everyone knows that we can not just pay attention to the scores we must learn everything. when I was 4 years old, I took a part in piano competition and won the first prize in middle school. so I think it is useful to learn musical instruments.
Leon
逐字稿:I think the first one is correct. Because whatever the education is. All of them are so important and necessary for every students. We need to develop in all the way. And we need to improve ourselevs though them. Learn to play a musical instrument is also foster a hobby. It's good for us.
修改版: I think the first one is correct. Becuase regardless of any education, they are so important and necessary to us. We need to develop in all aspects. We can improve ourselves while accepting them. Learn to play a musical instrument is also to cultivating a habby. As the saying goes, more skills do not weigh down the body.
Alice 1 )逐字稿 Playing music makes people clam down, when you have bad emotion, it can make you peace, don't remain bad tings. This is fantastic point the music has. And we can also learn some music .It can make us have a health mind. I agree that music is important education. 修改版 Music makes people happy and can calm them down when they are in trouble. When you meet difficulties, the best thing is to listen to music to relax and find a solution. It is better to learn a musical instrument and relieve your emotions.
Task1:I think music education is important.Today many people choose music for their personal habit,I'm also a music lover,I like soft music.I will enjoy it when I listening.I think music education can develop our imagination.every musical instrument is different, it also can develop our personality, In the stressful daily live it will avoid emotional damage
Isaiah:
逐字稿:I think it is important.Music can help us to relax ,if you have much pressure, you can feel less stressed through play instruments or listening music.It is meaningful. 修改稿:In my opinion ,it is important. Because nowadays, everyone's pressure is very high. If we cannot relax in a timely manner, it will lead to psychological problems. Therefore, it is necessary for us to relax in this way.All in all we should develop comprehensively, not just focus on our grades.
Vicky: 逐字稿: I think music education is important because for me listen to music it can make me relax when we we meet a lot of pressure and i can practice my fingers on the piano music education is important for me 修改稿:I think music education is important. for example. I always playing piano when I feel tired and pressure,it can make me relax. Music is like an antidote for me. In a music learning career, it tells me be patient and persevere can to get better results.
George 逐字稿:I think learn to play a musical instrument is necessary for every. You can improve your self when you are learning. You can make some friends when you are learning and communicating with them. 修改稿:In my opinion,learning a musical instrument is mearningful and necessary for everyone. In the process of learning. You improve yourself and master a new skill. It’s useful for people’s lives. And you can meet more friends when you are learning.
Claire 逐字稿:I think music education is more important. In our life now, we have lots of stress and something can bring us down. But we can use music to relieve stress. 修改稿:I think music education is more important. In our life now, we have lots of stress just like didn't do well in exam, not doing well in work and something in our life. These things always can bring us down. But in my opinion, music always can make people happy and relax, so we can use music to relieve our stress.
Victoria 逐字稿:In my opinion music education is most important . Why do I think so? Because many people can through music learning to change their character shortcomings. I think is more important for us . 修改稿:In my opinion some people can through music learning to change their character shortcomings but learning music isn't for everyone. Some people don't change by learning music; they do the opposite. Music learning is a good thing, but it must be suitable to better play its role. That's all I have to say. What do you think?
Regina 逐字稿:I think music education is important .We should learn more skill ,it can help us be better.If you have a special skill .You can show your skill to other .It's meaningful .Music education makes you more confident .Music education can let stranger know you quickly .You will become popular than before . 修改稿:In my opinion ,Music education is most important .In our school ,we will have more activities and we will join a music club .This show the importance of music education .If we learn music ,you can make more friends .Music education not only improve our temperament ,but also help us enter a new area .It's my opinion .
seanna 逐字稿: I think music education is very importan. Because we can learn more and more things different fields. When we grow up, they may help us. 修改稿:I think music education is very importan. Because music can help children develop in multiple ways, making the classroom less boring and enabling them to learn more knowledge, it may also be helpful in career choices in the future.
Wendy: 逐字稿:I agree with people should to learn to play a music instrument.Beause I think the music is necessary in our life.If you play music well,the other will like you more. 修改稿:I think music education is very important .Music can help students relax and convey the beauty of life.In the end,piaying music is great and can make other like you more.
Lynne I think learn music is very important for play a musent instrument.Because I think music is a good thing for Chinese.On party, many people have a very good strong point. I think essential for a person’s education to learn to play a musical instrument. Because .On party, many people have a very good strong point. I think music education is a plus for everyone party. SoI think essential for a person’s education to learn to play a musical instrument.
Task1:I think music education is important.Today many people choose music for their personal habit,I'm also a music lover,I like soft music.I will enjoy it when I listening.I think music education can develop our imagination.every musical instrument is different, it also can develop our personality, In the stressful daily live it will avoid emotional damage
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Selina 逐字稿: I think music education is important. Because music can lead me from sad to happy. And I think music can make me relax. Besides, music education can let me learning the famous musician and the background of music. That is a kind of knowledge. 修改稿:I think music education is important. Because music can lead me from sad to happy. And I think music can make me relax. Besides, music education can let me learning the famous musician and the background of music. That is a kind of knowledge. I like music very much! Sometimes I can’t leave it for one seconds. So learning music education is helpful and meaningful for me.
Mason 逐字稿;I think musical education is important, because in our life not just to learn lot of boring knowledge, it must have more than more interesting things, to full our life musical instrument is important thing in our life music in our life and you when you are tensions, it can make you relax and it can help you a lot 修改后:I think music enducation is important, because in our life not only just about learning but also have more interesting things to enrich our life, music can make you happy when you're unhappy,music can make you relax wgen you are nervous.Actually, music can help you a lot
Bobby 修改后:I believe learning a musical instrument is vital for education. It enhances cognitive abilities, fosters creativity, and teaches discipline. Music enriches lives, making it an essential part of personal growth.
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