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Day7 ESL S/L -- Rosefinch | Mr.Mou @ ShiShi AP Center #93

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Day7 ESL S/L -- Rosefinch | Mr.Mou @ ShiShi AP Center

https://shishiapcs.github.io/ESL-summer-day7-Rosefinch/

Flora0923 commented 1 year ago

Flora 1.修改前：In my eyes, the opinion of keeping a musical instrument is more reasonable. Because that the speed of mordern society is really fast , our lives are under too much pressure. I think music can be a good way to reduce our nagative feelings and our stress. Learning a musical instrument can make us relief . For example, when you’re playing piano, you may feel a sence of relaxation. And after it, you can have a better spirit to adress the things remaining.

2.修改后：I prefer the idea that having an instrument is necessary. Because that the speed of mordern society is really fast , our lives are under too much pressure. I think music can be a good way to reduce our nagative feelings and our stress, learning a musical instrument can make us relief.You may feel a sence of relaxation and can have a better spirit to adress the things remaining after feeling the charm of music.