Summary:
The team is trying to figure out why people leave their companies. The dataset is from Kaggle, which contains information regarding to job level, work life balance, etc.. The objective of the team is to find out why people leaving their companies and what can be done to make employees stay.
Three things I like
(1) The theme and objective seem close to students' life, especially for those who will graduate soon. This could make students know better about their job choice.
(2) The size of the dataset is pretty huge, which seems quite reliable.
(3)The dataset is listed for reviewer to check.
Three improvements
(1) Better to split different topics as single paragraphs.
(2) Better to add more information about background research.
(3) Better to dig a little bit into the data and find some other interesting objectives.
silviaruiz44
commented
4 years ago
Summary: The team is trying to figure out why people leave their companies. The dataset is from Kaggle, which contains information regarding to job level, work life balance, etc.. The objective of the team is to find out why people leaving their companies and what can be done to make employees stay.
Three things I like (1) The theme and objective seem close to students' life, especially for those who will graduate soon. This could make students know better about their job choice. (2) The size of the dataset is pretty huge, which seems quite reliable. (3)The dataset is listed for reviewer to check.
Three improvements (1) Better to split different topics as single paragraphs. (2) Better to add more information about background research. (3) Better to dig a little bit into the data and find some other interesting objectives.