remove the heighted "the" from the below
add an "s" to the word "need" highlighted here:
here the reference of Jack and Kevin is referenced before it was defined:
and the whole thing needs to be revised cause there are a lot of mistakes specially in the example many times you use the same name for the service provider and the consumer in the example which is super confusing
remove the heighted "the" from the below
add an "s" to the word "need" highlighted here:
here the reference of Jack and Kevin is referenced before it was defined: