[v0.0] 26.02.24 Advisor comments

[skkwan]

• [x] Remove mention of CERN from title of that section

• [x] One more page of LHC and beam dynamics

  • [x] Overview image of the LHC
  • [x] describing the acceleration stages
  • [x] mention other experiments
  • [x] describe origins of the pileup (luminosity cross section delta T), plot of pileup vs. luminosity (pile-up is important theme since we are going into HL-LHC)
  • [x] Link the inelastic pp cross-section to pile-up
  • [x] f-factor

• [x] Spell-check for LaTeX

  aspell check -l en *.tex  

• [x] Get university template

• [x] Section 1.4: Expand on Level-1 Trigger section - equivalent in length to Phase-2

• [x] Analysis chapter

[skkwan]

Marked as closed, next batch of triage comments is in issue #5.