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A repository for my Master's thesis
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Second draft review #4

Closed smpark7 closed 4 years ago

smpark7 commented 4 years ago

This issue can be closed after @katyhuff reviews the 2nd draft of this thesis.

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katyhuff commented 4 years ago

Not complete (need to read last half more closely), but here are some comments you can start on. park-ms.pdf

smpark7 commented 4 years ago

Thank you. I'll review these comments first

smpark7 commented 4 years ago

Hi @katyhuff , I've made changes according to your comments and included the decay heat figures and discussions in Chapters 5 and 6.

Regarding one of your comments, do you have any recommendations for renaming the label, "Polimi and TUDelft models"?

main.pdf

katyhuff commented 4 years ago

Finished comments on first round. https://drive.google.com/file/d/1CNEx-Duz9JTxx_6U5cpowsxBoFcb9Gl_/view?usp=sharing Mostly BLUE color in last few chapters.