This paper investigates the 2023 Toronto Mayoral Election by analysing survey data from OpenDataToronto. From a quick glance, it seems you've made significant progress with your paper but some parts are still incomplete.
Strong positive points:
You picked an intriguing, unique set of data to analyse
You have detailed your variables and included well-formatted tables and graphs
Critical improvements needed:
At the moment, your paper does not have a title section clearly and briefly detailing what your paper will be about
You could benefit from including an abstract
Suggestions for improvement:
Consider adding a discussion section to better organize your different discussion points
At the moment you don't have a README, consider updating that
Evaluation:
Overall, your paper has a decent amount of substance and whatever you've included so far is great, it's the things that you have not yet included that are holding you back at the moment.
Estimated mark: 70/100
Reason: You've set yourself up for a potentially good paper. You have a detailed introduction, tables, graphs, and an appendix. But you are missing little things here and there such as a title, discussion section, and your README. You'll be on the right track once you fix these things.
Opening statement summary:
This paper investigates the 2023 Toronto Mayoral Election by analysing survey data from OpenDataToronto. From a quick glance, it seems you've made significant progress with your paper but some parts are still incomplete.
Strong positive points:
Critical improvements needed:
Suggestions for improvement:
Evaluation:
Overall, your paper has a decent amount of substance and whatever you've included so far is great, it's the things that you have not yet included that are holding you back at the moment.
Estimated mark: 70/100
Reason: You've set yourself up for a potentially good paper. You have a detailed introduction, tables, graphs, and an appendix. But you are missing little things here and there such as a title, discussion section, and your README. You'll be on the right track once you fix these things.