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Fermi Paradox: Alien suns #12

Closed joshbperry closed 4 years ago

joshbperry commented 4 years ago

Link Here: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1Rj7qDBUzdtAk1a-2OmdoN9rmcDpgV4Fpo551Fss5V_E

joshbperry commented 4 years ago

1st draft compete. Ready for editing

MikkelHPANDA commented 4 years ago

I have completed the editing review. Again, I used suggestion mode, which will be my default practice from here on. Well, except when I fail to notice that the software has defaulted back to editing mode ;-)

joshbperry commented 4 years ago

Approved all grammar and formatting edits, and did some minor re-writes to make a few things more clear.

joshbperry commented 4 years ago

Re-wrote a few paragraphs after another review of the literature on M-dwarfs

MikkelHPANDA commented 4 years ago

Okay. Starting a new edit review.

MikkelHPANDA commented 4 years ago

I have finished my second review.