Fermi Paradox: Life doesn't find a way

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Fermi Paradox: Life doesn't find a way #15

Open joshbperry opened 4 years ago

joshbperry commented 4 years ago

Link here: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1WMU0cy8q_N8_7wN7YRFdI2zjC1HbGnXns9xaQfT6Vys

joshbperry commented 4 years ago

1st draft complete, ready for editing

MikkelHPANDA commented 4 years ago

Preliminary editing complete.

joshbperry commented 4 years ago

Approved all formatting and grammar edits. Did some major re-writes to the first section to address issues that came up in earlier parts, and to make some of my explanations more clear and accurate. However, I think some of the comments you made about evolutionary biology are not entirely correct.

MikkelHPANDA commented 4 years ago

Found some more minor corrections. Otherise, this article appears ready to go. I included a comment to think about, but I don't think it warrants a rewrite.