Closed joshbperry closed 4 years ago
Finished preliminary edit review.
Implemented pretty much all suggestions, since they were related to grammar and formatting.
Okay, looks good. Should be all ready to go. I did a little tweek on the format ("justified" paragraphs) to clean up the layout visually. I also replaced "may" (permission) with "might" (possibility).
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1rZ9_yV1drJ205x3wItAnGicu4jtJipxoU00XkB9aneM