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Summary of Mars Society 2019 conferance #26

Closed joshbperry closed 4 years ago

joshbperry commented 4 years ago

https://drive.google.com/open?id=1rZ9_yV1drJ205x3wItAnGicu4jtJipxoU00XkB9aneM

MikkelHPANDA commented 4 years ago

Finished preliminary edit review.

joshbperry commented 4 years ago

Implemented pretty much all suggestions, since they were related to grammar and formatting.

MikkelHPANDA commented 4 years ago

Okay, looks good. Should be all ready to go. I did a little tweek on the format ("justified" paragraphs) to clean up the layout visually. I also replaced "may" (permission) with "might" (possibility).