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Space Decentral's Case For Space: An Introductory Overview #29

Open MikkelHPANDA opened 4 years ago

MikkelHPANDA commented 4 years ago

Introductory article for Space Decentral's Case For Space.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vLY55fT0JqbOYlHK04In5GPilhKoEVeaamOfMFu4TTY/edit#heading=h.px3likr6h1o8

MikkelHPANDA commented 4 years ago

Looking for someone to do an edit review.

joshbperry commented 4 years ago

Finished 2nd edit review. Looks good for the most part. I just found a few more grammar issues

MikkelHPANDA commented 4 years ago

Okay, this should be ready to go. I accepted most of the changes. However, as a rule, the punctuation comes before the endquote only in an actual citation, and not when the quotes are used to highlight a pword or phrase. Therefore, I did not accept the displaced periods.

Nice catch on the which/that. However, I decided to go with "that", so I deleted the comma instead.