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MHLLV: Taking Off #30

Open MikkelHPANDA opened 4 years ago

MikkelHPANDA commented 4 years ago

First issue of series: "The Continuing Evolution of a Modular Heavy Lift Launch Vehicle" (hereafter referred to as MHLLV). This issue discusses historic strategies used by HLLVs, as well as proposals for a "wet-workshop" launch configuration. Introduces MH12500 "wet-workshop" module proposal.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Oa7uaAcQtwCBX7HQpCJi2eZLaE2eip9mZ-Q4q3B3TBA/edit#

MikkelHPANDA commented 4 years ago

Looking for an edit review. I probably should not do my own :-)

joshbperry commented 4 years ago

Finished preliminary review. Looks good overall, just found a few grammar issues and gave some suggestions to make things more clear.

MikkelHPANDA commented 4 years ago

Finished rewrite. Incorporated most suggestions. Also added a conclusion paragraph. A second edit review is recommended. Otherwise, it should be ready to go.

joshbperry commented 4 years ago

Finished second review. Looks good overall, just made a couple suggestions to change sentences that seemed a little awkwardly worded.

MikkelHPANDA commented 4 years ago

Ready to publish. Copy available in Ghost.