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Fermi Paradox: Galactic Dead Zones #9

Closed joshbperry closed 4 years ago

joshbperry commented 5 years ago

Link Here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AJFAEyk84mq9edbo-r5QTC4IgdfRY3MmdoY-wJr_ak8/edit?usp=sharing

joshbperry commented 4 years ago

Finished recommended re-writes

MikkelHPANDA commented 4 years ago

Completed edits. I decided to use suggestion editing, in case if someone disagrees with the changes. This will require a more active final review, however. I have included some comments regarding the arguments, as well. These do not necessarily require any change in text, but they might be useful for further articles.

joshbperry commented 4 years ago

I incorporated most of your recommendations and did a final read-through, but I do think that some of the points you made are better addressed later in the series.