Closed willemvb closed 4 years ago
While doing so, please also have a look at the copy for the new intro that Jef proposed
What's up with the three dots? Should the intro be longer and is it just a placeholder? If not I'd use a period instead of …
Regarding the copy: I'd say "develop and maintain" or "build and maintain", and give a sense of time as well, something like:
Learn how to build complex Laravel projects, and maintain them for years to come
Not sure if "in this course from Brent Roose" is necessary in the intro?
Regarding the "what's inside" block:
I actually like the video part already, is that still dummy content?
The book part I'd change like this:
This 100+ pages ebook guides you
- from concepts like DDD
+ from concepts like DDD and hexagonal design
-to scaffolding complexer Laravel applications.
+to building and maintaining large Laravel applications.
Beautifully designed by Seb De Deyne!
What do you think? I can make the changes myself, but want your opinion first
I would also emphasise that both the book and the video course contains knowledge that took us years to learn.
How about
This 100+ pages ebook guides you from concepts like DDD and hexagonal design to building and maintaining large Laravel applications. It bundles all of the knowledge we gathered from years of project development, and is beautifully designed by Seb De Deyne!
Iterated on your version a bit:
This ebook is your guide for building large maintainable Laravel applications. Along the way, you'll be introduced to concepts like DDD and hexagonal design, all while still embracing Laravel's focus on elegant code. The knowledge in this book is built from the years of experience our team has building these large, robust applications. The book is beautifully designed by Sebastian De Deyne.
Feel free to iterate further on it.
What's up with the three dots?
yup, dummy content. I merged subtitle and intro text since both where similar
I actually like the video part already, is that still dummy content?
yes, I'll keep that for know
I would also emphasise that both the book and the video course contains knowledge that took us years to learn.
Agreed, took it to a higher level
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