[ ] Alarm sounds before other ship hits Leanne's. She still doesn't fully wake until impact.
[ ] Alarm started via a remote beacon aimed right at her ship. It included an ID. A bounty ID, Leanne thinks.
[ ] Leanne should recognize most of the assassins. Be distracted briefly by wondering if they knew they were going to their deaths; what desperation led them to this? Need to eat, maybe?
[ ] Chapter 2
[ ] Leanne learns of bounty on Delphine by looking up ID at police HQ
[ ] Make sure Leanne is amused that she, with a bounty on her, is at police HQ, and police probably wouldn't even bother her if she knew... but certainly won't given that she's wearing a hunter helmet so cannot be recognized.
[ ] Decide what Leanne actually shows Delphine. Does she show bounty card? If so, and Delphine looks surprised, Chapter 4 needs to change to have Delphine not be ignorant of this.
[ ] Chapter 3
[ ] Determine if narration is Too Much Actually
[ ] Does it seem enough like a separate entity?
[ ] Does it seem too much like a separate entity? Don't want to have more than a single line that directly implies such in each chapter, at least not until we get further into the story.
[ ] Chapter 4
[ ] If Delphine sees bounty card in Chapter 2, she needs to not be ignorant that there's a bounty against her. Or Leanne needs to remind her. She shouldn't say outright 'there's no bounty against me' like she does now.
Todo: