Redlines may need some rewording (I know you took them from Stefanie's sheets, but I think the following needs to happen):
All descriptions should be reworded to begin "Project focuses..." or "Project ignores..." or whatever
The following headlines need changing from A > B: Raw material > Extraction; Women & marginalised groups > Discrimination; Human Rights > Violation of Human Rights; Local communities Consent > Consent Ignored; Local communities Participation > Participation Blocked
All descriptions should be reworded to begin "Project focuses..." or "Project ignores..." or whatever
The following headlines need changing from A > B: Raw material > Extraction; Women & marginalised groups > Discrimination; Human Rights > Violation of Human Rights; Local communities Consent > Consent Ignored; Local communities Participation > Participation Blocked