p. 135
paragraph on Dependency Grammar: without a dependency graph or
similar picture, the discussion is hard or impossible to follow ,
depending on whether the reader is familiar with Dependency Grammar
(first disjunct) or not (2nd disjunct). As it is the introduction to
the section which is about to explain the background, it would be
helpful to make explicit that all necessary details are about to
be explained. Still, some statements clarifying the perspective of
Dependency Grammar would smooth the presentation. As it stands, the
text presupposes that the reader understands dependency graphs
later.
To do.