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IESG Barry Leiba: Section 3 #177

Closed stoffi92 closed 4 years ago

stoffi92 commented 4 years ago

— Section 3 —

prefix as well as community matching and manipulation, must apply to the Flow Specification defined NLRI-type

I can’t tell whether “Flow Specification defined” is meant to be a compound modifier for “NLRI-type” (in which case the former needs hyphens and the latter does not), or this is meant to describe a defined NLRI tyoe called “Flow Specification”. I think you mean the latter. Can you re-word this or re-punctuate it to make it clear?

suehares commented 4 years ago

The text is: Old/ Standard BGP policy mechanisms, such as UPDATE filtering by NLRI prefix as well as community matching and manipulation, must apply to the Flow Specification defined NLRI-type, especially in an inter- domain environment. / One fix. New /Standard BGP policy mechanisms, such as UPDATE filtering by NLRI prefix as well as community matching and must apply to the Flow specification defined NLRI-type. /

Comment - since BGP is always in a inter-domain environment the second part of the sentence is not useful.