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IESG Warren Kumari: Modern IP routers contain both the capability #216

Closed stoffi92 closed 4 years ago

stoffi92 commented 4 years ago

“ Modern IP routers contain both the capability to forward traffic according to IP prefixes ...” For some reason the “according to IP prefixes” scans oddly to me - the rest of the actions are also (largely) “according to ip prefixes” - this is more of a nit / preference, but I think it would be better to just drop that phrase.

suehares commented 4 years ago

Old/ Modern IP routers contain both the capability to forward traffic according to IP prefixes as well as to classify, shape, rate limit, filter, or redirect packets based on administratively defined policies./ New / Modern IP routers contain both the capability to forward traffic as well as to classify, shape, rate limit, filter, or redirect packets based on administratively defined policies. /

This is a suggested change per Warren's comment

stoffi92 commented 4 years ago

//doc Changed as suggested.