slides feedback

[story645]

• [x] change out first slide image for table scatter heat image, remove words, pull constraints bullet list here.
• [x] explain alpha and omega (or drop or move to when explaining model)
• [x] lable k0.... in fb graph
• [x] consistent example dataset that unpack
• [x] add roadmapping - swap out FB image for bullet list
• [x] make clear coordinate system agnostic way of passing data and structures
• [ ] clean up the story arc -> use paper structure?
• [x] integrate the literature section into the story - Spivak about fiber, push Schiedigger into the artist section
• [x] apply fiber bundle to real data/ have formalism
• [ ] add timeline/gant chart
• [ ] make clearer that this is math + implementation

[tacaswell]

• talk slower

• define equiveriance before using it in a sentence

• in general be careful about jargon

• [x] "tools tuned to DATE continuity"

• [x] don't use general-purpose data figure when talking about networks

• never go backwards in your slides x 10

• define semiotics

• [ ] move Fiber slide a bit later, were not sure why we cared about it when it came up

  • [ ] flip these two slides

• [ ] have not really motivated monoids

• [ ] {} read to me as "set" which are not ordered so this is very confusing

  • [ ] not clear the thing we should be looking at here is the arrows not the emoji

• [x] re-order the connectivity slides

• [ ] go left-to-right in graphic continuity slide