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Copyedits more page #410

Closed pikurasa closed 8 months ago

pikurasa commented 8 months ago

This has copyedits, suggestions, and comments. The comments are in the HTML itself.

This needs review before publishing.

I have even more suggestions, but I'm trying to just make incremental improvements until we have a chance to agree upon some terminology and a styleguide.

quozl commented 8 months ago

Reviewed. Looks great. Comments can be removed in a later commit.