I've gone through and resolved many of the minor grammatical issues in this section, including sentence flow (run on sentences, garden path sentences), ambiguous pronouns, and clarity of intent. As a result, the chapter flows much better and avoids distracting the reader.
I've maintained the author's original intent as much as possible. Thanks :)
I've gone through and resolved many of the minor grammatical issues in this section, including sentence flow (run on sentences, garden path sentences), ambiguous pronouns, and clarity of intent. As a result, the chapter flows much better and avoids distracting the reader.
I've maintained the author's original intent as much as possible. Thanks :)