wking
commented
11 years ago On Wed, Jul 10, 2013 at 08:20:44AM -0700, karinlag wrote:
- Adding post about the Oslo bootcamp
A few edits:
- You need to add venues/uio (or an expanded form of that) to metadata.json.
- “endwe” → “end we”, but maybe “In the endwe ended up with” → “We ended up with”.
- Standardize “the first day” and “the second day” (not “day 2”).
- “feared lots” → “feared lots” (double space).
- “windows” → “Windows” (or “MS Windows”). Also “git” → “Git”, “vcs” → “VCS”, “python” → “Python”, ….
- “and that I due to this simply” → “and I simply”.
- “dependables” → “dependencies”.
- “peoples problems” → “people's problems”.
- “of total newbies, to” → “from total newbies to”.
- “teach these people, they were” → “teach these people; they were”.
- “they would ready” → “they would be ready”.
- “project organization. etc” → “project organization, etc.”.
gvwilson
karinlag
Note: both Lex and I are authors, but the system only seems to permit one, which is why I set myself as the author.