Incorporated in 06353df3e233715aa8ecf88980cea908a9fed078, with some light editing.
Two items were left out:
L467 recommendations for plain text formats was not incorporated, as this recommendation is already made later in the paper in the context of manuscript authoring, where I think it fits better.
L842 comment on Overleaf and Authora were not included, as this section is about version controlling plain text, while these platforms allow plain text authoring in the cloud, which is different than the thrust of the suggestion in this part.
Originally written by @sbassi, edited by @gvwilson - will need to be folded into the LaTeX.