I thought the use of latin abbreviations made some of these sentences quite difficult to parse, so I went through and removed them (e.g., i.e., and etc.), replacing them with more direct english. I also broke up some sentences into multiple parts to make them easier to parse, and applied a bit of sentence capitalization to the bullet lists.
I tried to not change any semantic meanings. In at least one section, the sentence didn't quite parse for me though, so I did my best to bring it back to what was intended when I removed the latin abbreviations.
I thought the use of latin abbreviations made some of these sentences quite difficult to parse, so I went through and removed them (e.g., i.e., and etc.), replacing them with more direct english. I also broke up some sentences into multiple parts to make them easier to parse, and applied a bit of sentence capitalization to the bullet lists.
I tried to not change any semantic meanings. In at least one section, the sentence didn't quite parse for me though, so I did my best to bring it back to what was intended when I removed the latin abbreviations.