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RESTful Design for Internet of Things Systems
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Editorial pass #15

Closed mkovatsc closed 7 years ago

mkovatsc commented 7 years ago

The intro was a collection of independent sentences, each in a new paragraph. I am trying to improve the flow with more proper, fluent paragraphs.

More editorial changes to come today.

mkovatsc commented 7 years ago

No one awake... so let's have some progress and smooth out issues later ;)