review habitat restoration

fawda123 commented 2 years ago

Now that the draft pages are complete, please review them for any final edits that may be needed, including text, graphics/tables, and layout... this is the final round of edits before it goes "live". Things to consider:

Does the text make sense? Are there any errors that need to be corrected?
How do the graphics/tables look? Do they send a simple, high-level summary appropariate for the SOB? Are there other graphics that we could add?
Is the layout ok (e.g., presentation of ideas, section labels, pictures to include, graph sizing , etc.)?

Page to review: https://tbep-tech.github.io/State-of-the-Bay/docs/habitat-restoration

You can make edits to the Rmd file here: https://github.com/tbep-tech/State-of-the-Bay/blob/master/docs/habitat-restoration.Rmd

Or just comment on this issue with things you'd like to see changed.

If you're happy with the existing page, just close this issue.

And don't forget to use the Project board to track progress on this issue: https://github.com/tbep-tech/State-of-the-Bay/projects/3

sscolaro commented 2 years ago

@Gmangrove @fawda123 You are going to hate me when I say this, but can we make the HMPU section where you outline the important targets more visual? Maybe instead of the bullet, we can develop an infographic to represent the different habitats and targets? Maybe we could just make the page more visual by added a before and after pic of the Rock Ponds so folks can see the vastness of the project.

fawda123 commented 2 years ago

@sscolaro I agree that this would a nice addition. Maybe easiest thing to do for now is to add some pics of the Rock Ponds. @Gmangrove or @Tbep-Joe, do we have any good before/after pics for this? An infographic would be nice, but I'm probably not the right one to take the lead on that.

Gmangrove commented 2 years ago

To get to @sscolaro 's thought about the 'vastness', maybe a couple of pics from google earth, ca 2010 and now (attached quick examples) - Caption something along the lines of "The Rock Ponds Restoration Project created or restored 1,043 acres of habitat, including mangroves, salt marshes, and coastal uplands. The Southwest Florida Water Management District led the effort, and multiple other organizations including TBEP were significant contributors. Pictures are pre-restoration (2010, left) and post-restoration (2021, right)."

RockPonds_20100404 RockPonds_20210506 ?