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Updates to the Distribution Lists page #69

Open matthewcummings opened 8 years ago

matthewcummings commented 8 years ago

"Forward Important Email Alerts as Texts" --> ???
I'm not sure what this title is doing on this page, shouldn't it be something like "Distribution Lists" or "SMS Distribution Lists"?

"In this section, you’ll learn how to forward your emails as text messages to one or even to hundreds of people and learn how to never miss another alert or notification." --> "In this section, you’ll learn how to send text message to many recipients via email." [I took out the never miss another alert part, it didn't really make sense on this page.]

"You can read more about distribution lists from our" --> "You can read more about distribution lists on our"

"6. Choose what phone number will be sent with the messages. Click here to learn more about sender settings." --> "Choose what phone number will be used to send the messages. Click here to learn more about sender settings." [NOTE: remove the extra 6]

"Click Continue. Now you can set up forwarding in your email application or send emails to the distribution address." --> "Click Continue. "Your distribution list is now ready, you can now send emails to this address and have them forwarded to all recipients in the list. Be sure to copy the list's email address."

" Anyone who knows the email address associated with your distribution list could send an email to it. This could result in several messages being sent from your account. Therefore, it is advised that you don’t use this email address for signing up an account or share it with the public. Keep it secret." --> "Anyone who knows your list's email address can send messages to it and those messages will be forwarded to your list users. Therefore, it is advised that you keep this address a secret."

"Let’s imagine we’ve created a distribution list" --> "Let’s say that we’ve created a distribution list "

"In order for all of them to receive" --> "In order for all three of them to receive"

"As a result, all three recipients will receive the text message and will be able to react quickly to fix the server issue" --> "All three recipients will receive the message as a text and will be able to react quickly to fix the server issue"

"You can also include TextMagic contact lists and separate contacts in the distribution list’s recipients field to avoid having to add numbers one by one." --> "You can also specify TextMagic contact lists and individual contacts as recipients in distribution lists to avoid adding numbers one by one."