Minor QIP workflow/instruction modifications

[jackalyst]

• Fix incomplete paragraphs + inconsistencies + improve descriptions
• Improve local instance workflow: use rbenv + include jekyll server instructions

Special thanks to Robyr for pointing them out!

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