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Correction work - there are so many errors on correction. #84

Closed thruthesky closed 5 years ago

thruthesky commented 5 years ago

우수민, for these reasons. 'for' means 'because' and the student meant it. But 'for' cannot appear at first on the sentence. So, the correct answer is 'Because of'. The word 'From' makes good sense also. But the student clearly meant 'Because of'.

김태성 Because, we do not play for we have planing mind.

comma shouldn't follow after conjunction. So, 'Because, ' is wrong.

FYI) The format must be "subject + verb, for subject + verb" when 'for' is used as 'coordinating conjunction'.

In the sentence, the student used 'for' not for the 'coordinating conjunction'. The student simply mentions what he cannot do due to the study in academy. So, the words are better in format of "for what ..."

And 'planing mind' is a wrong words. It should be 'planing in mind' or 'have in mind.'

So, better answer is "Because we do not play for what we have in mind."


Wrong correction) When I was in middle school, I want to play with other students but not play go to academy.

Better correction) When I was in middle school, I wanted to play with other students. But I had to go to academy.