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Improve clarity of "about us" paragraph on homepage #50

Open RedDragonWebDesign opened 7 months ago

RedDragonWebDesign commented 7 months ago

Deepend mentioned your website somewhere so I went and took a look. After reading it, I found the "about us" paragraph:

tilde.club is not a social network it is one tiny totally standard unix computer that people respectfully use together in their shared quest to build awesome web pages

Even with that, I can't figure out what Tilde Club is or what it does. My suggestion would be to elaborate a bit more in this text. Are you guys a wiki? A web host? A social group? What's your primary activity? I would love to find out just by reading your homepage :)

deepend-tildeclub commented 7 months ago

Honestly when I took over this in 2019 that was part of the original site. Kinda just left it for that reason. Could probably elaborate on that in 2024 :)

EndreEndi commented 7 months ago

I didn't understand it ether, but maybe is my fault

deepend-tildeclub commented 7 months ago

How about something to this effect:

Tilde.club is more than just a platform; it's a unique community-driven space. Unlike conventional social networks, we offer access to a single, standard Unix computer where members collaborate with respect and creativity. Our mission is to empower users to craft amazing web pages, share knowledge, and learn together in a supportive environment.

RedDragonWebDesign commented 7 months ago

The words "platform" and "community-driven space" seem a bit unclear. Maybe...

Tilde.club is a unique social network that offers access to a single, standard Unix computer where members collaborate with respect and creativity. Our mission is to empower users to craft amazing web pages, share knowledge, and learn together in a supportive environment.

Also, "collaborate"... maybe that could be elaborated on a bit. Collaborate on what exactly?

deepend-tildeclub commented 7 months ago

Tilde.club gives you access to a shared Unix computer where you can make web pages, learn, and share knowledge. It's a place where working together happens naturally, all within a friendly and supportive setting.