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The Distributed Ontology, Modeling and Specification Language (DOL) - an answer to the OMG RFP OntoIOp. * View the latest version here: https://github.com/tillmo/DOL/raw/master/Standard/dol.pdf. * Convenience version with diff to version of August 24: https://github.com/tillmo/DOL/raw/master/Standard/dol-diff.pdf * Homepage of OntoIOp is

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general proof reading #74

Open tillmo opened 9 years ago

tillmo commented 9 years ago

e.g. does the document fit the OMG expectations?

conradbock commented 9 years ago

Till, et al,

The current submission doc is missing "meta-submission" material, normally appearing in Section 0. See:

Section 4.9.2 (Mandatory Outline) of the OntoIOp RFP http://doc.omg.org/ad/2013-12-02.
Section 0 (Submission Material) in http://doc.omg.org/bmi/2012-10-02, as an example.

Some of it is in the current Section 6, and should be moved to a new Section 0. It's odd they don't include Section 0 in the submission template http://doc.omg.org/submission-template.

Let me know if you have any questions.

Conrad

tillmo commented 9 years ago

Hi Conrad,

in the most recent version, there is a complete section 0. See https://github.com/tillmo/DOL , there is a reference to the document in PDF form.

Till

conradbock commented 9 years ago

in the most recent version, there is a complete section 0. See https://github.com/tillmo/DOL , there is a reference to the document in PDF form.

Looks good. Except Sections 6.1 and 6.3 should be moved to Section 0. The adopted document (after Section 0 is removed) shouldn't have authorship info in it.

Conrad

longstreth commented 9 years ago

I've completed review of Sections 1 thru 7 and emailed the annotated PDF to github/Tillmo. Will continue with Section 8 thru appendixes.