timekit-io / booking-js

:date: Make a beautiful embeddable booking widget in minutes
https://developers.timekit.io/docs/booking-widget-v2
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More expressive success text #6

Closed laander closed 8 years ago

laander commented 8 years ago

The success message after booking complete could be more clear and expressive, preferably with a message

fragmichdoch commented 8 years ago

pls add full localization/customization for all text strings

fragmichdoch commented 8 years ago

bildschirmfoto 2015-11-18 um 23 04 10

this might help :)

laander commented 8 years ago

Thanks for the quick mockup! Here's my first take on it:

screen shot 2015-11-19 at 10 57 14 am
fragmichdoch commented 8 years ago

looks fine! two things

..just my two cents

laander commented 8 years ago

Fair points, updated again:

screen shot 2015-11-19 at 4 15 19 pm

Edit: oops, it should ofcourse be "An invitation has been sent to"

fragmichdoch commented 8 years ago

release! ;)

..you will probably gain some experience while you A/B test the wording. If you ask me, I would always prefer a wording that tells exactly what to do next and expresses urgency. e.g "Please do now check your mailbox and accept the invitation to confirm the booking."..your call :)

laander commented 8 years ago

While i agree with what you're saying, it's a little complicated in this case because 1) We're short on space and I want to keep the wording as short possible (while still conveying the right message) 2) If the recipient has a Google account, you can actually skip the inbox skip totally - the invitation can be accepted directly from Google calendar. Therefore, I'd like to signal that in a more generic manner

I'll release this tonight and we'll see what the feedback says :)

laander commented 8 years ago

Released in v1.2.0, closing..