In this proposal I believe what is missing is the intention of this section. So I simply made it explicit so that it is easier to read what then comes after.
If not, it took me a long time and a discussion with colleagues to understand it without this context. Now you have a 'direction' of reading and it falls better in at least my mind.
ekr
commented
7 months ago
…ion a little bit.
In this proposal I believe what is missing is the intention of this section. So I simply made it explicit so that it is easier to read what then comes after.
If not, it took me a long time and a discussion with colleagues to understand it without this context. Now you have a 'direction' of reading and it falls better in at least my mind.