Closed huitema closed 5 years ago
Section 1:
s/servers rely on the Service Name Information (SNI) TLS extension/servers rely on the Server Name Indication (SNI) TLS extension [RFC 6066]/
Section 2.1:
Why is parental controls in quotes?
Section 2.2:
s/Encrypting the SNI now will complete this push/Encrypting the SNI completes this push/
(for timelessness)
Section 2.3:
In the first paragraph I would suggest trying to use the present tense more so that this still makes sense far in the future.
s/At the moment/At the time of this writing/
Done in PR #45
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COMMENT:
Section 1:
s/servers rely on the Service Name Information (SNI) TLS extension/servers rely on the Server Name Indication (SNI) TLS extension [RFC 6066]/
Section 2.1:
Why is parental controls in quotes?
Section 2.2:
s/Encrypting the SNI now will complete this push/Encrypting the SNI completes this push/
(for timelessness)
Section 2.3:
In the first paragraph I would suggest trying to use the present tense more so that this still makes sense far in the future.
s/At the moment/At the time of this writing/