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graelo commented 3 years ago

Hi @davidpdrsn

Thanks a lot for your Tower tutorials, they really helped me!

However, while reading them, I was sometimes distracted by missing articulations and you/we switching. So here's my proposal of a rewrite for the first one "Inventing the Service trait":

It keeps the exact same code and narrative.
It just brings some articulations and some additional consistency (around we/you/your framework/your users) that I wish I had when reading it.

I hope you'll like it! Cheers

PS1: Because of text wrapping, this kind of rewrite makes the diffs not really helpful for reviewing, 🤷‍♂️

graelo commented 2 years ago

After 11 months, I guess my PR won't be reviewed.

Darksonn commented 2 years ago

Sorry about that. I don't know whether this change is still relevant, but if a change falls through the cracks, it's generally a good idea to ping us to remind us that it exists.

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