gcohenfr
commented
6 years ago Great poster!!!
- last bullet of Intro: say may help instead of will help HR
- in methods: say Model I is selected instead of obtained, similarly for Model II
- in methods: Variables selected by both methods, not models. The models do not select variables
- ANOVA nested model comparison is not the name of a method, you can say that these variables were tested using an F-test.
- in results: In Fig 2... the size of the circles is not the reason of the high correlation. You should mention that the size and color of the circles represent the magnitude of the correlation
- say "the higher the level of the workers' education, the higher their scores are"
- instead of "women receive lower..." say "women scores are lower than men scores"
- in Table 1: say "linear regressions for literacy and numeracy scores: estimated coefficients and values"
- in conclusions: "the correlation between them is 0.93." should be a separate item and indicate this is the correlation between scores.
- "can negotiate about ways" should be changed to "can negotiate ways to..."
- remove capital after e.g., "e.g., changing..."
- In recommendation start bullets with capital letters, consistently with other parts
- change "do data imputation" to "impute missing observations"
- Add Estella in the acknowledgment
liuzhen529
Hi all,
Our poster draft is ready: https://github.com/aiod01/STAT550-450-for-Seniorworkers-from-Korea/blob/master/Documents/450Poster.pdf
We will be very appreciated if anyone can give us some feedback. Thanks!
STAT 450 group