Juwan issues <3

[jnpoJuwan]

since you asked me to post them here, here I shall post them.

• ala is the multiplication mark, it should take a taller shape
• the loops on esun are a bit too wide
• jaki has a very non-jaki shape
• jo may be too small, especially the lower half
• kasi looks interesting, I like it, tho maybe put the leafs higher on the stem
• ken is the Latin letter K
• kili is too fat, it should overall be smaller and also have a dent at the top
• kon is backwards isn't it? also please exaggerate the curves a bit more. same for linja and teo
• kule could be a bit wider
• la is too tall and too thin
• lawa could be a bit thinner, if it's a perfect circle then it makes it hard to read for me
• the top radical for loje/moku is too disproportionally big
• lukin has to be squashed, not a perfect circle
• the top circle of mama could be bigger
• mani and moli don't match, one is a perfect circle one is a
• meli/mije/tonsi could have the circles made bigger ** tonsi could also be the transgender symbol, to match sp more closely → ⚧️
• mun could be wider
• nanpa should be square
• nasa isn't curvy enough ;(
• noka could be wider overall
• kepeken/pali/pana, that thumb is too big!!
• palisa could be a bit more square, right now it's a perfect oval
• the chevrons on pan are too wide
• pini's top and bottom are bit too thin
• this isn't obligatory, but something fun I've seen, pipi could be thinner comparatively to akesi, see nasin Koko and linja lipamanka
• sama could be wider
• seli is too short
• the bumps on sewi are too mathetically precise, if you get what I mean
• sijelo is an umbrella
• the dots on sitelen are ovals, maybe try a down-up-down pattern? not sure this is even a problem at all
• sona is a square instead of a rectangle
• soweli is too square
• the eyes on suwi are too tall
• tan is pointing down, where it should be pointing back
• for toki, try fitting it into a square rather than a rectangle
• unpa is too thin, the negative space is too small
• the tops of the legs on utala are too long
• wan lacks the serif, hard to read
• weka, like ala, is too tiny
• the terminators on wile end a bit abruptly
• the chevrons on e are too packed together
• pilin is too mathematically precise
• lon is too small overall

I do want to say that you are doing a great job btw!!! it is your first work but it is way more than I could ever do

[pontaoski]

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