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Alice Individual Final Video Review #66

Open tangalice opened 2 years ago

tangalice commented 2 years ago

video : https://drive.google.com/file/d/11-0T8_guhfHA9cAMfD_ALp4UG1qWZFE6/view?usp=sharing

LindaLiu1202 commented 2 years ago

Hi Alice! Your video is very well done! You connect the minilabs you made to the CB topics really well and you also state what you learned from the CB videos! Your explanation for the greyscale and invert button for the gallery images and how iteration helps the "lazy programmer" is very well and clear, which shows that you have a good understanding of the CB iteration topic. Your logic gates lab is very well explained too. The only suggestion I have is that you could explain a little more about your second topic, which is about how you added data abstraction to your codes of the random color generator that you made, because I still don't fully understand it after watching the video. Grade: 5.75/6

tonyhieu commented 2 years ago

Hi Alice! Good job on your video. I liked how you built upon your core greyscale and invert minilabs and included them into the main photo gallery. The implementation of iteration into the process was also well executed. The design of the logic gate lab helped to visualize boolean logic as well. I feel like your color code lab and logic gate lab could've been switched for data abstraction, though, as abstraction has more to do with taking abstract concepts like electronic switches and broadening them to something more general like colors. Grade: 5.75/6

ellenjxu commented 2 years ago

Hi Alice! Great video, I really liked your explanations of the concepts and how you defined them, such as when explaining loops in your image manipulations on the gallery. I also liked how you weaved in the CB concepts to your logic gate lab . You also showed collaboration in working off of the original gallery code as well as individual progress in minilabs - well done! My only comment is that you could possibly add in more about data abstraction with lists/dictionaries. Great job!

sanvi1855544 commented 2 years ago

Hi Alice! I like how you first define iteration and then demonstrate the application of it using the inverted colors image manipulation. I like how you used data abstraction in the random color generator-specifically how your function generateRandomColor hides details and simplifies the algorithms. I like how your logic gate lab analyzing user information because it is analyzing data which is a section 2 big idea. By only criticism is to make your delivery more organized by tying each ticket to a big idea.

Score: 5.75/6