Tiamat launches into the air and streaks toward her foes!
Nilan screams in terror as he is crushed beneath you!
Nilan is knocked down on the ground!
Nimasho screams in terror as she is crushed beneath Tiamat!
You are knocked down on the ground!
Nilan screams in terror as he is crushed beneath you!
should be:
Nilan screams in terror as he is crushed beneath DragonName!
ie.
Nilan screams in terror as he is crushed beneath Tiamat!
Nimasho screams in terror as sheis crushed beneath Tiamat!
should be:
You scream in terror as youare crushed beneath Tiamat!
This is from the viewpoint of Nimasho
Tiamat launches into the air and streaks toward her foes! Nilan screams in terror as he is crushed beneath you! Nilan is knocked down on the ground! Nimasho screams in terror as she is crushed beneath Tiamat! You are knocked down on the ground!
Nilan screams in terror as he is crushed beneath you! should be: Nilan screams in terror as he is crushed beneath DragonName! ie. Nilan screams in terror as he is crushed beneath Tiamat!
Nimasho screams in terror as she is crushed beneath Tiamat! should be: You scream in terror as you are crushed beneath Tiamat!