varunm532
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6 months ago 0.97/1 Glows for Blog:
- concise and straight to the point
- Meets all college board requirement
- the blog is organized well and is very straightforward
- good description to code in blog
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included links to key commits and good explanations
Grows:
- there wasn't much backend code, maybe show some of your backend code so that there is a balance between your frontend code and backend code
- for the pull requests linked maybe add some description about what your adding next time
The brief writeup is well written to explain the intention and the complexities. Without digging deep, one can figure out the program is a trading platform between registered friends. This part was well explained the the crisp writeup. Listing the College Board requirement and connecting it with your features make it easy to understand that you followed the college board requirements, which is excellent. You have added screenshots per each requirement with explanation and your code is see front end codes mainly, but that satisfy the college board requirements.
Glows for video:
- meets all college board requirements
- captions are placed well so that it doesn't obstruct project
- feature works
- shows backend data collection
- explains each action with technical words
- includes arrows so that the views can easily see the important things
Grow for video:
- maybe reduce on the mouse pointing a bit because while showing the column for friends, the mouse covered the column(0:38-0:39)
- maybe zoom in on the backend data
The video showcase all features of your work and it is within 60 seconds limit, as well as well within other conditions, which is great. The transaction between backend and frontend is smooth and shows all functions of your project.
Overall your project looks very good and the looks fun to play.
Link to blog Link to 1 minute video