This adds my initial draft to the MPI section. Feel free to criticize/correct/improve!
I also rewrote a few paragraphs as discussed with @ranocha - these are merely suggestions! In particular,
I'd be OK to remove the sentence added in 6dc194c if you feel like it doesn't fit,
I removed the last statement from the conclusions since I didn't feel it was substantiated anywhere in the paper. If we want to keep it, I suggest to add another short paragraph somewhere stating some of the differences to other languages that support the claim that "a new programming style is necessary"
This adds my initial draft to the MPI section. Feel free to criticize/correct/improve!
I also rewrote a few paragraphs as discussed with @ranocha - these are merely suggestions! In particular,