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Trust Spanning Protocol Specification
https://trustoverip.github.io/tswg-tsp-specification/
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Editorial suggestions for Overview section #17

Open daidoji opened 6 months ago

wenjing commented 5 months ago

Line 50: ", including additional security considerations" - emphasizes that having "additional" security considerations in the transport is one out of many considerations to have. Replacing that with "such as security considerations" may be misinterpreted as requiring or mainly about security considerations. If your edit is mainly about grammatical preference, then I would suggest "such as additional security considerations and others"? TSP does not require you having a secure transport. This point is much more important than grammatical niceties.

The rest looks ok.

wenjing commented 5 months ago

Line 42: one more issue: a new term "trust-based ecosystem" is introduced but I think we should avoid. It's a term of complex meanings that we do not wish to engage with in TSP. It's a good concept in elsewhere, but introducing it here limits TSP and reduces its scope.

daidoji commented 5 months ago

Roger, will make first edit and remove the second.

daidoji commented 5 months ago

@wenjing changed per your comments.